Tips and example for writing thesis statement

Tips and Examples for Writing Thesis Statements
(from the Own at Purdue: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/)

I. Tips for Writing Your Thesis Statement

1. Determine what kind of paper you are writing:
• An analytical paper breaks down an issue or an idea into its component parts,
evaluates the issue or idea, and presents this breakdown and evaluation to the
audience.
• An expository (explanatory) paper explains something to the audience.
• An argumentative paper makes a claim about a topic and justifies this claim with
specific evidence. The claim could be an opinion, a policy proposal, an evaluation, a
cause-and-effect statement, or an interpretation. The goal of the argumentative paper
is to convince the audience that the claim is true based on the evidence provided.
If you are writing a text which does not fall under these three categories (ex. a narrative),
a thesis statement somewhere in the first paragraph could still be helpful to your reader.

2. Your thesis statement should be specific—it should cover only what you will discuss
in your paper and should be supported with specific evidence.

3. The thesis statement usually appears at the end of the first paragraph of a paper.

4. Your topic may change as you write, so you may need to revise your thesis statement
to reflect exactly what you have discussed in the paper.

II. Thesis Statement Examples

1. Example of an analytical thesis statement:
An analysis of the college admission process reveals two principal problems facing
counselors: accepting students with high test scores or students with strong
extracurricular backgrounds.
The paper that follows should:
• explain the analysis of the college admission process
• explain the two problems facing admissions counselors

2. Example of an expository (explanatory) thesis statement:
The life of the typical college student is characterized by time spent studying, attending
class, and socializing with peers.
The paper that follows should:
• explain how students spend their time studying, attending class, and socializing with
peers

3. Example of an argumentative thesis statement:
High school graduates should be required to take a year off to pursue community service
projects before entering college in order to increase their maturity and global awareness.
The paper that follows should:
• present an argument and give evidence to support the claim that students should
pursue community projects before entering college